Reviews For The Red Book
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Reviewer: Nieriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/06 - 07:56 pm Title: Lonely Roads

soo good. :D It drew me in. There was not extremely long descriptions or anything, but in a way that made it better, especially using the First Person POV for Smaug.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/06 - 01:12 am Title: Lonely Roads

nice.

poor smaug. but crap happens...
jk. it was very well written in the aspects that you tell it from smaug's point of view. i liked how you included a family with smaug and give him the ability to have emotions much like a human than a cold limp of a rock, or should i say Gold.

keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! At first I had the idea that each dragon name somehow translated into the word 'gold', but I'm kinda glad I didn't do that now :D. On to the next story...

Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/06 - 01:06 am Title: Insane What Love Can Do

very nice about the whole weather thing in the begining. You kind of got me when you mentiond Legolas beofre Aragorn.

very good.

Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/06/06 - 01:02 am Title: Table of Contents

okayyy... *reads on*

Reviewer: Nieriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/06 - 02:35 am Title: Insane What Love Can Do

This was so nice! I always love it when people take a moment from the movies or book, and make it so that we see so much more of what a character was thinking during that 5 or 10 seconds. whee. =D

Author's Response: I know that that little moment in the extended edition looks like they've both completely given up to most people, but I never always thought there was something different happening there. Thanks so much for your review!

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