I have never actually read a story that crosses into an alternate universe, but I should do so in future, that was excellent. I enjoyed the way in which you kept the characteristics of the Elves, and was able to bring in the neccesary modern elements as well. This is certainly an erotic scene, but well written and I enjoyed it emensly.
Author's Response: Thank you.. I'm glad that you enjoy it, and i will try to update asap. Hannon-le, mellon-nin. Sivan Shemesh