I finally have something bad to say about your story... :) (sorry) You made a huge mistake. Orlando LOVES adventure and traveling. He absolutely can NOT live without it. He's always doing something crazy, like jumping out of a plane. :) Just a pointer. And please don't break the nice friendship between these guys. Sure it's nice to have a romance, hell I LOVE romances, but you're going to fast. That's just my opinion, though. Otherwise, the only other tips I'd give you is spelling and repeats. (you said a couple things twice in the same spot, :) sorry)
Sarah: Ahhh! This is such a cool story! Please update!
Jessica: *rolls eyes* I'll put on more detail than Sarah here. The plot is quite interesting, and Roxie is a very interesting character. I can't wait to see what you do with this!
hehhe, I do that trying-to-find-clothes thing a lot. I do discover things I thought I lost in my closet, and then I complain about having nothing to wear. :P I loove your story, it's so realistic and un-mary-sue like.
This has got to be one of the best actor fics I've ever read, so far. :) I love the OC, she's absolutely perfect for the story, of course. You're doing an awesome job on this, keep up the good work!
Awww, god I LOVE this! Please write more! This is such a beautiful topic, and you've captured the High School scenario very well. I will leave reviews for every chapter, I swear.
Author's Response: Oh wow...thank you so much! I didn't know if I should keep doing the flashbacks to high school, but I probably will. Thank you SO MUCH for reviewing!