Beeing hit by lighting is so last century, could you be a little more creative, please? Not that bad other wise, though I think an evening of the sexes is in order, personally. Keep writting!
Author's Response: Yeah, It was either the lightning or a class five tornado, but I only had a limited time to write it, so it was the lighting...I might end up rewriting that chapter...maybe, and yes the next chapter is going to be focused on Jake and what will be happening to him...have any suggestions?
Oh very good!!! Dont you hate in when things like that happen. Oh!! Yeah almost forgot like the bit about the horses, I'm a horse perosn myself. We should chat sometime. I love the description of the orc!!
Author's Response: LOL, I have two horses :) oh the hoy of living on a farm
Author's Response: oops, I ment 'joy'....stupid typos...
Did you HAVE to kill "Mike"? I LIKED him! He could have been like a loyal, but stupid, henchman. Hench-man? Hench-orc? Henorc? Horc? At this point I'll stop talking 'c ause I'm sleep-deprived, but I really, REALLY liked "MIke".
Author's Response: LOL, I'm glad you liked him, but I am planning to do another 'hork' for Paige, and I didnt want to ruin that. I think I am going to name it 'Bob', what's your oppinion?