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Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/08 - 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 3 Painful Losses

Please write more!

This is a very interesting pseudo-10th walker story.
NZ

Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/05/06 - 01:24 am Title: Prologue

Interesting, I like it so far, but I think it could use a little more backround. The third person veiw is a little disorenting. I'm trying to be nice and constucktive(misspelled word), so please don't think that this is a flame. Arathron, Aragorn's father was just a chieftain of the Duinidain in Arnor, so he can't be the "True King of Gondor", I'm a little lost. Help by up-date. ;]

Author's Response: But Arathorn was supposed to be the King of Gondor, wasn't he? I had thought he was. That's a big wake-up call. Wow. Thanks for the advice though. I think you'll see it more clearly when you read the 1st chapter. The prologue, I agree, didn't have a lot of info.

Reviewer: Aureachara Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/05/06 - 10:59 pm Title: Prologue

okay ... i guess ill bite whats next?
Josalyn14@yahoo.com email me when you write more
chara

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