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Title: Chapter 3 Painful Losses Reviewer: Nazgrrl Signed
Please write more!

This is a very interesting pseudo-10th walker story.
Date: 21/01/08 - 02:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Interesting, I like it so far, but I think it could use a little more backround. The third person veiw is a little disorenting. I'm trying to be nice and constucktive(misspelled word), so please don't think that this is a flame. Arathron, Aragorn's father was just a chieftain of the Duinidain in Arnor, so he can't be the "True King of Gondor", I'm a little lost. Help by up-date. ;]

Author's Response: But Arathorn was supposed to be the King of Gondor, wasn't he? I had thought he was. That's a big wake-up call. Wow. Thanks for the advice though. I think you'll see it more clearly when you read the 1st chapter. The prologue, I agree, didn't have a lot of info.
Date: 29/05/06 - 09:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Aureachara Signed
okay ... i guess ill bite whats next? email me when you write more
Date: 29/05/06 - 06:59 pm [Report This]
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