Wow, I love this so far! Great job, this is definitly one of my favorites. Yay you got into top two that is so cool! I love this story however, it is so descriptive its like a movie playing in my head. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks Alatariel! *hug* And I'm really exicted (cough:hyper) about getting into the final two. And thanks, my goal was to describe and put a nice ending in! :D