Reviews For Arwen Undomiel
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Title: Chapter 2 Thomas Reviewer: jonaslover2013 Signed

I really liked this story. You have excellent details and descriptions and it mixes very well with the dialogue. I hope that you continue to update. I like how Arwen can talk to animals. That's very interesting. Please continue to write this story.
Date: 18/06/09 - 01:44 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Thomas Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed
I like this! I want to see it continued!!
Date: 02/04/07 - 08:26 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Oh, I hope that Talathiel doesn't have more sinister motives than want. The twins seem a little simplistic to me. The birth, also seemed too orderly; my sister had her baby in four hours, and thats's really quick.

Author's Response: I thought the birth should be faster than normal, because you know, they're elves. I was reading this other story where an elven child was being born and was completely painless. So yea, I just kinda went with it. But thanks for the review anyway!
Date: 06/06/06 - 08:34 pm [Report This]
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