Reviews For Arwen Undomiel
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Reviewer: jonaslover2013 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/06/09 - 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 Thomas


I really liked this story. You have excellent details and descriptions and it mixes very well with the dialogue. I hope that you continue to update. I like how Arwen can talk to animals. That's very interesting. Please continue to write this story.

Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/07 - 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 2 Thomas

I like this! I want to see it continued!!

Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/06 - 12:34 am Title: Chapter 1: In The Beginning

Oh, I hope that Talathiel doesn't have more sinister motives than want. The twins seem a little simplistic to me. The birth, also seemed too orderly; my sister had her baby in four hours, and thats's really quick.

Author's Response: I thought the birth should be faster than normal, because you know, they're elves. I was reading this other story where an elven child was being born and was completely painless. So yea, I just kinda went with it. But thanks for the review anyway!

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