I really liked this story. You have excellent details and descriptions and it mixes very well with the dialogue. I hope that you continue to update. I like how Arwen can talk to animals. That's very interesting. Please continue to write this story.
Oh, I hope that Talathiel doesn't have more sinister motives than want. The twins seem a little simplistic to me. The birth, also seemed too orderly; my sister had her baby in four hours, and thats's really quick.
Author's Response: I thought the birth should be faster than normal, because you know, they're elves. I was reading this other story where an elven child was being born and was completely painless. So yea, I just kinda went with it. But thanks for the review anyway!