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Title: Chapter 2: Really Reviewer: LadyElenielLothiriel Signed
Your story is good and I like it but go over it a bit and edit when you have the time, you have a lot spelling mistakes. Othwise I really like your story! =]

Author's Response: i know.....i don't have internet right now so editing and stuff is really hard.
Date: 07/24/07 12:08 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Really Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
do you want a beta?

if you do email me

faramiriel@gmail.com

Author's Response: Sure! *grins*
Date: 09/29/06 06:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Really Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
This is good. I want more! Like, really soon! But it could do with some major editing. It has a lot of typos. FYI-it's spelled "Ithilien", not "Ithellion".

Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanx! I posted this like a month agao and haven't done anything to it since... i need to go over it... *blushes*
Date: 09/28/06 07:45 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Tardy Reviewer: bodobodot1 Signed
This is in all probability the best short fic ive ever read!

Author's Response: thanx
Date: 07/17/06 05:49 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2: Really Reviewer: LadyofLight Signed
*Snortgigglesnort*
I enjoy the really, reallys, as you can tell. Keep on writing!

Author's Response: thanx i really like review, really, i do. *wink*
Date: 07/07/06 06:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Tardy Reviewer: LadyofLight Signed
Oh yay! I've been waiting for someone to reply. You've got a great start so far, I can't wait to see what you come up with.

Author's Response: thanksies. I working on some of my others but i'm dead right about now. so i think i'm goin to turn to this little start.
Date: 06/30/06 10:42 pm [Report This]
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