Your story is good and I like it but go over it a bit and edit when you have the time, you have a lot spelling mistakes. Othwise I really like your story! =]
Author's Response: i know.....i don't have internet right now so editing and stuff is really hard.
This is good. I want more! Like, really soon! But it could do with some major editing. It has a lot of typos. FYI-it's spelled "Ithilien", not "Ithellion".
Please, update soon!
Author's Response: Thanx! I posted this like a month agao and haven't done anything to it since... i need to go over it... *blushes*
Oh yay! I've been waiting for someone to reply. You've got a great start so far, I can't wait to see what you come up with.
Author's Response: thanksies. I working on some of my others but i'm dead right about now. so i think i'm goin to turn to this little start.