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Oh, man. This is one of the few times that I read a *completed* story and then exclaimed: "Noo! Don't finish it now at the good part!" Yeah... I actually wanted more - but it's your story, so I won't force anything. After all, in this way it leaves a very bittersweet taste in the mouth, sort of speak.
Good job. :)
Author's Response: I want the reader to imagine what happens next!
Love it, though it's kinda sad.
But then again I should be used to it. This reminds me of one of the stories I have posted, sorta.
Author's Response: I've not read any of your stories (i think), what is it called?
This is a nice little piece, to hear the feelings of a urak hai. For once we dont see it as an evil killing machine, but maybe it has a conscious mind with as you say a flicker of doubt.
Author's Response: thank you for the review! i hope you checked out the other short story I wrote called dunlending as well!