Reviews For Uruk
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Reviewer: belkar bitterleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/12/07 - 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

Is this part of a series? i think it is a brilliant short story but it should link to another one

Reviewer: Beregond5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/06 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, man. This is one of the few times that I read a *completed* story and then exclaimed: "Noo! Don't finish it now at the good part!" Yeah... I actually wanted more - but it's your story, so I won't force anything. After all, in this way it leaves a very bittersweet taste in the mouth, sort of speak.

Good job. :)

Author's Response: I want the reader to imagine what happens next!

Reviewer: Gilraen Elanesse Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/07/06 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it, though it's kinda sad.
But then again I should be used to it. This reminds me of one of the stories I have posted, sorta.
~Gil

Author's Response: I've not read any of your stories (i think), what is it called?

Reviewer: So Yun Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/07/06 - 06:49 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a nice little piece, to hear the feelings of a urak hai. For once we dont see it as an evil killing machine, but maybe it has a conscious mind with as you say a flicker of doubt.
yun

Author's Response: thank you for the review! i hope you checked out the other short story I wrote called dunlending as well!

Reviewer: Syril Silverleaf Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/07/06 - 10:24 am Title: Chapter 1

this is good, too. You might make all these little drables into a series.

Author's Response: Yeah that's what I'm doing

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