Is the next chapter going to resolve the conflit between the family?
Do you have Word or such?
It helps, with spelling and grammer, to write on a program like that and then copy it into here.
Author's Response: Well in the next chapter: The lorien delegates arrive Melrue has another nightmare, but its the real thing that happened Mirkwood palace is attacked and maybe lass goes missing? Yes i do use word, and i sort of posted this in a rush at midnight, but i've emailed it to my beta and he will send it back and i'll repost. Sorry if the mistakes were an inconvenience Yun