Yepyep. This is a very honest and true poem which desrcibes the courage and sizes of Hobbits very well. I gather from your name that you love Hobbits - just like me! If you like stories about Merry you may enjoy my stories! I will look at some of your other stories/poems soon!
Author's Response: Thank-you for reading and your nice review! I will take a look at your stories.
I like the structure of your poem. Was the choppy line in the middle " although small" supposed to be leading to the next poetical phrase?
Author's Response: Yes, the line "although small" is supposed to lead to the next line. Thank-you for the review!