I am truly honored that I am one of the authors you dedicated this story to. It was amusing, and I liked it. I can just picture Legolas in the tree taunting two very frustrated twins. I liked that they called him Greenleaf. Also I liked that you mentioned how close Legolas is to the trees, hiding him even when it looked like he would be discovered. Having Legolas keep saying, "Say it" over and over was a funny little touch. Again thank you so much, Yun, for the dedication. I'll see you at Naice a Nilme. :o)
Author's Response: I am the one who is honoured to have been able to dedicate my story to you sivan and kasmi. Althou kasmi hasn't seen it i think. But it's my way of saying thankyou and well done for your stories Yun
It was pretty good, it made me laugh. I thought it was a little weird that Glorfindel could see him so easily though. And I thought the title was a little confusing, I would probably call it something a bit more concise. Still, good story. I'm sorry to hear you are leaving the site, you are a good author and I have really been enjoying your stories. Well done with this, it is very funny!
Author's Response: I am glad i made you laugh, i always thought humour wasn't one of my qualitites. I am wondering how you found the title confusing? Yes as i said in my profile it is too painful to have lost so much feedback and reviews and losing so many stories. Thankyou very much for the review, i just hope the 3 authors i dedicated it too see it! Yun Btw Glorfindel is a very elder elf, his senses are more heightened then that of the twins.