Reviews For In the Night
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Reviewer: Narya Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/09 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nice, Merry - this fits exactly with how I'd imagine Merry to be feeling at this point. I like that the thoughts aren't quite coherent, and how very hobbit-like to end on a (fairly) positive note.

*Nitpick* - "probally" should be "probably."

Good job, though - keep it up.

Reviewer: Vanya Vasa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/06 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like it. The brokeness of the lines seems to convey the way Merry kept falling in and out of consciousness and best of all it ends with hope.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I am glad you liked it.

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