It is really good! I ordinarily shy away from anything that suggests Aragorn and Legolas as a couple, as I've never exactly been a huge fan of slash. It is still a really good poem though. Just one thing; 'strickly' is 'strictly'. Apart from those little nit-picks, it was beautiful. Well done.
Author's Response: thank you for the review. i fixed 'strictly' by the way, thank you. i very much appreciate the feedback, another 'thank you' to you.