Poems about the Sea longing are so sad! To imagine all the families torn apart becuase of it...... *cries uncontrolably*
Author's Response: thank you so much! I really love to have feedback on my stories.
Good poem! I like how you wrote about the sea and the visualisation you used, it's almost like being by the seaside!
Did you mean it to come out slightly melancholy but musical? I believe you did a good job whether or not that was what you aimed for!
Author's Response: yeah, that's what I was aiming for. Its how all of my poems sound... Its kind of my trade mark. Thank you.