Reviews For Sea Longing
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Reviewer: Daewen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 - 01:41 pm Title: Sea Longing

The sea calls my name. Just so beautiful and haunting.

Reviewer: elven lily Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/05/07 - 12:56 am Title: Sea Longing

Wow, that was really descriptive and beautiful!

Reviewer: Aerlinniel Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/11/06 - 01:15 am Title: Sea Longing

Poems about the Sea longing are so sad! To imagine all the families torn apart becuase of it...... *cries uncontrolably*

Loved it!

~Mel

Author's Response: thank you so much! I really love to have feedback on my stories.

Reviewer: Enelya Shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/09/06 - 01:54 pm Title: Sea Longing

Good poem! I like how you wrote about the sea and the visualisation you used, it's almost like being by the seaside!
Did you mean it to come out slightly melancholy but musical? I believe you did a good job whether or not that was what you aimed for!

Author's Response: yeah, that's what I was aiming for. Its how all of my poems sound... Its kind of my trade mark. Thank you.

Reviewer: gythia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/06 - 07:36 pm Title: Sea Longing

I could smell the sea! btw just 1 typo, it's 'coarse' wood.

Author's Response: Thanks, for the compliment and the correction. I really apriciate them.

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