Author's Response: Ah, folks either love it or hate it. I'm glad you are the former. Whenever I get a new review, I always go back and read the chapter. It always amazes me to think I wrote that so long ago and people are still finding it and enjoying it. Thanks for the feedback.
haha, That was a great line. Very funny story. :)
Author's Response: Thank you, Luna. It's a pleasure to have a new reader. Thank you for taking the time to review. I hope you enjoy the rest.
Does the redhaired elf have a name?
Do you know if there's any connection between elves and vulcans? They seem simaler.
Author's Response: Wait 'till she teaches everyone! No obscene comments, just a few embarrassing moments.
rnHe will have a name, I was avoiding names in the first book because I was afraid I'd make something up that sounded silly, but I expect he'll be with Elrond's party when they get to Gondor. We'll find out his name then.
rnThanks for the review!
Author's Response: Those are fun! I've tried not to overdo it, though. It's neat that you are re-reading. I get drawn back to the earlier books when I answer your reviews. Thanks for the feedback!
Author's Response: Thank you! I used to be afraid of getting bogged down in details, but my reviewers started asking for more, so I changed my style a little bit. I'm glad it worked out. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Thanks. He's fun to write. Glad to see you're still enjoying re-reading! Thanks for the review.
That's how I've always felt. I love cats too.
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!
It's the embroidery. The gemstones, you know? I suppose the Elves of Rivendell go in for that "it is better to look good than to feel good" thing, at least at court. I'm glad to find the Elves of Eryn Lasgalen feel differently.
Thanks for the feedback!
I'm trying to get a little of the old humor back into book three, but Elaura has changed so much. It will be interesting when all of her old friends from Rivendell arrive.
Glad you are enjoying rereading.
Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: If you talk to yourself, you're never alone. I can't wait until Glorfindel comes to Minas Tirith. I wonder if anyone from Rivendell will even recognize her?
Thanks again for the review!
Author's Response: I miss Elaura's sarcasm, I really do. It just doesn't go well with her new life, though. From crass soldier to pregnant princess in one year; it's quite a leap.
Thanks for the feedback. I may have to revisit these chapters myself.
Author's Response: Ah, if only I could write instead of talking. I might have managed a little better in life. Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Oh neat! I reread sometimes too, especially when I get stuck. It is most definitely supposed to be funny. I kind of miss those days of short chapters and slapstick humor, but Elaura has evolved, even if I haven't.
I'm really happy you're enjoying it the second time around and Thanks a bunch for reviewing. There's a new chapter for the third book. I just posted it. Hope you like it!
Author's Response: Maybe not, but try to keep an open mind, all Mary Sues aren't hell-spawn, all romance isn't crappy or X-rated, and hopefully you'll continue to enjoy it.
Thanks for the feedback!
Oh, and Grelvish - that is Grey Company "elvish" - ugh! Not Elvish at all. You might want to check real Tolkien elvish from sites like Ardalambion http://www.uib.no/People/hnohf/, there are others too, with tons of good, useable phrases. Other than that, in scenes where no "elvish" is spoken and no legomance, I still think this story is brill.
Author's Response: Great! Welcome! Unfortunately, if you continue reading you may have more disappointments. There's no getting around it, Elaura is a "Mary Sue" and the story is a "Legomance" it may even fall under the category of "song fic". Hence the title. In Elaura and Legolas' defense, however [I believe] love at first sight is very Elvish. Elves tend to think with their hearts and there is precedence in Tolkien's works for Elves knowing one another's hearts long before they figure out how to live together. In my defense, the story writes itself, I'm just the transcriptionist.
As far as the Elvish goes, I'm not an expert on any language, certainly not one as complicated as Sindarin [or Quenya]. I give it the old college try and with some helpful feedback I did manage to go in a better direction later on. Truth be told, Westron isn't English, but it would be a pretty weird story if we had to wait for someone to teach it to her.
I appreciate the feedback, positive or not, but don't get your hopes up if you were looking for a no-romance, grammatically-accurate fic. Sorry.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Welcome! It's always great to have a new reader/reviewer! Hope you continue to enjoy it.
I've just finished reading book one of your story, and had to register to review! Yours is the best story of its type I have read, meaning no disrespect, but it's not often an author can pull off inserting their persona into an existing story with such Ã¨lan. I enjoyed it immensely.
Author's Response: Thank you! I love to hear from new readers. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
Thank you again for the review.
Author's Response: Oh, Welcome to the land of registered users!
being new to fanfiction i don't really know much about it but from what ive read so far yours is really good
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry about what you know, it doesn't matter what other people think. If you like it and enjoy it, please keep reading. If you don't, I hope you find something you like better.
Thank you for taking the time to review. Enjoy!
Author's Response: WOW!! A NEW READER! This is exciting. Thank you for taking the time to give me some feedback. I've started chapter one of book three. Book two is very short, relatively, but I expect book three to be a lot like Book one. Thanks again! Glad you like it!
Author's Response: Test. I'm checking to see if I can respond to reviews in my other stories, because I can't respond to them in Book Three for some reason.
Author's Response: That was definitely something I know about. My dad had several seizures and brain surgeries, he always woke up from them confused. It was easy to write.
My mom and I have always wondered what happened to the Entwives, I think Tolkien had intended to write about them, but never got around to it.
My mom has always been a big part of my life and I figured Elaura's mom would be too . . . here's a little secret, my mother really had that dress! When she read the chapter she asked me why Elaura's mother couldn't have been in flowing robes . . . LOL!
I'm looking forward to getting the next book up, it shouldn't be long, but the army is getting in the way again.
Thanks for the review!!
Author's Response: A NEW REVIEWER!!!
NEVER NEVER NEVER give up! Writing is just taking reading one step farther. If reading can take you into another world, when you write you get to create another world. Finishing this book is up there in the top ten best feelings I've ever had, well actually the top five. Stay with me and keep reading.
I love the feedback and I appreciate you.
I glad shes going with Gandulf, but what wass with his fogeting? Does he fully recover?
Pretty please up-date soon? Cookies and pie?
Author's Response: Just keep in mind that an age to the Ents isn't quite the same as it is to us. They will always have time to get back together.
Gandalf got his brain a little scrambled when he died; he's wiser now and a bit more childlike. He's been renewed by the Valar. He'll have plenty of time with Elaura to bring him back, but he'll always have one foot on the other side. Nobody can see the Valar and not be changed.
I'll hold you to that cookies and pie! I love pie!
Thanks for staying with me, Wyn.
Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. That's the best thing about writing, you get to make things the way you think they ought to be.
Thank you for reviewing. I hope you like the next book. Your reiviews have really kept me going. I never thought I could ever write a book and now I'm really looking forward to the next one.
Author's Response: Great! I can't wait either! Thankd for the feedback!