Shouldn't Elaura asked for an eleth? I think that asking Legolas to help her put her bra on was a bit un-canon-ish, but thats my opion. Keep updateing! :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I would NEVER discourage contructive criticism, but I'm not sure I understand your suggestion. Do you mean that Elaura was out of character for asking? She was terribly excited about being free of the bandages, I suppose she just didn't want to wait to find a female. Or do you think Legolas should have flatly refused? I kind of thought his chivalrous side would win over his modesty. Finally, what do you mean by cannon? I'm not sure if this story would qualify either as book cannon or movie cannon. What do you think?
Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it; it's VERY helpful.