I love it!!!!!!!!!! It is full of emotion, and does not ramble. You are a genius. I would really llike it if you would beta for me. I feel that I have good ideas and a hard time voicing them.
Happy reading and watch out for the ninja squirrles.
Author's Response: I am really glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing! I really wish I could beta for you, but I'm afraid I've already got a heap on my plate right now, and I'm a bit too busy. I'm really sorry!
I submitted a review before the site crashed . . . sadly, it was erased. So I'll say what I said before: haunting and wonderfully written!
Author's Response: Thankyou! I was upset when the site crashed and all my reviews got deleted, I'm really grateful you reviewed again! =)
what a beautifully written story and so good. keep it up! bein xxx
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing!
Really good work! Your character is quite original. I like your ending... it's quite sad, but I tend to like sad stories better.
Glad it's completed and I like your style of writing in this story. =3
Author's Response: Thanks heaps! It's great to know you liked my story. =) I like sad stories as well.
*crying silently* That was so sad! I loved it though. You are so good at writing stories! I think your dream will come true!
Author's Response: Oh wow, thankyou so much! You have no idea how much that means to me.
that was a very sad story, but very well written...
Author's Response: Thankyou! It was supposed to be sad, I'm glad you think it is well written.
OH this is so sad!
Author's Response: Glad you thought so, it was supposed to be!
Oh, very good chapter! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks!