Poor Nadhras! I like the story so far. Though, I did spot a few grammar and spelling mistakes. And I'm pretty sure that you don't say 'ellons' and 'elleths', but 'ellyn' and 'ellyth'. I can't remember whether it was a 'y' or 'i', but it is definately one of the two.

I think you have a really good plot going here. I would maybe suggest getting a beta, but aside from that it is really good. I look forward to the rest!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading my story! On my translator it said "ellons" and "elleths". Prehaps on yours it is different. Sorry for not answering for a bit, internet troubles.