Oh Aerlinniel, this is so sad, not really very dark but very sad. I'm so sorry you feel so depressed all the time, I kind of know how you feel - look at my Darker series if you want an example - but on the plus side, you have an amazing gift for poetry and song-writing. I hope things get better for you eventually, hugs - Taeliwren
That was awesome! All your writings always are! Oh, I know it's none of my business, but, while reading the reviews, I had the oddest feeling that you've met Androboy. He should take the personal stuff elsewhere . . . can't believe he railed against this great song!
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I have met Androboy......I'll explain when I send you my next chapter. And I agree with you, he should take it elsewhere. Unfortunately I cannot stop him, but what bugs me is that this song is about people I knew five years ago, way before I knew him. Like I said, I'll tell you the rest by e-mail. Hannad Brassen! ~Mel
That last review was uncalled for. But it won't delete. I have pushed that delete button several times, and it won't go away.
Author's Response: Okay.
Most groups out there can't come close to the emotion in this. this is really good. i've been there and back and i understand it way to deeply. make a band, and put all your songs to music. sing about the real reason peaple wear wristbands and hoodies in mid-summer.
Author's Response: Thanks. I am glad some people share my opinion about these sort of things. My friends and I are planning on starting a band...we just don't know when. Thanks for reviewing! ~Mel
If you keep treating people like the way you did me, its no wonder nobody cares how you feel. Yes, I do know what its like, and I have YOU to thank for it. Thanks a bunch for sharing your misery! And yes, you ARE fit for hell.
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Wow, that was really beautiful. And sad. I loved the way you wrote the emotions, they were so real! I can idetify, and I think you did a great job. You should definately write a tune to it, it is a beautiful song!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you read the other three songs I posted. I wonder if I should send them to Evanescence? Nah, I'll keep them for myself. And yes, I will write music to it sometime...Thank you so much for reviewing this song! ~Mel