I laughed so hard reading this! Oh my god! That was hilarious! Great job!
I only have one question. Was this supposed to take place in Mirkwood or Lothlorien? Because Celeborn and Galadriel rule over Lothlorien, and I don't think they'd be able to ban Gimli from Mirkwood since it isn't their territory.
Other than that though, amazing job!
A very funny story! You know, you might want to do a sequel! ( If you already have, then I haven't read it )
Author's Response: A sequel is a wonderful idea! And, actually, at the moment, I'm in a writing mood...let's see what happens! Thanks so much for the kind review! ~God bless
HAHAHA!!! (More ha's would be included, but I don't want to get kicked off the site ...) HILARIOUS!!! Tweezers hey?? Nice ... loved it! Please write more! ;D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, I'm hoping that I'll be able to write more Legolas and Gimli stories. So thank you very much for the compliment! ~God bless
Oh my word, that was so funny! You wrote it in such an amusing way, it had me laughing from begining to end. Gret job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! What a compliment! I have to say that I really enjoyed writing this particular story. Thanks again! ~God bless
I loved it!
You could remove a few commas though.
Author's Response: Thank you for telling me about the commas! I always end up putting too many of those, lol. Go figure! Anyway, thanks for reading! ~God bless
Humorous! I like stories like this, they're really nice to read. Glad it's short and sweet! Just have to watch any mistakes in typing, as we all do =3
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I love to get reviews! ~God bless
Teehee. Very funny! I've always liked vain Legolas stories. I did notice a couple of spelling and grammar mistakes though. For example, 'Gimli simply dogged it'. 'Dogged' should be 'dodged'. Just a couple of things like that which could do with fixing. Aside from that, it was really good!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! As soon as you talked about the mistakes, I went back and fixed them. As I said before, I'm a terrible speller. ~God bless
HA! That was hilarious! I'm rolling on the floor laughing! I always liked the love/hate relationship between Gimli and Legolas, though this seems more like a hate/hate relationship! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Yeah, this is a hate/hate relationship! Legolas is so graceful and perfect in the movies, and even though I like him, it can kind of get on my nerves that he is so perfect. So, it's fun to make him the less perfect one in the story. Same thing with Aragorn. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! ~God bless