Reviews For The Race of Man
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Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/09/06 - 03:27 am Title: Chapter 1

I really liked it! I loved the idea. It was really powerful.

I did notice a few typos and spelling mistakes, I think it would flow better if you fixed those. Aside from that, it was great. Well done!

Author's Response: Thanx! in the one i had posted before, everything had been fixed. I'll be sure to go over it when i can!

Author's Response: Thanx! in the one i had posted before, everything had been fixed. I'll be sure to go over it when i can!

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