Your writing style is very calming! I liked your story. Even if this is slash for some people, it's written well.
Keep on writing!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thank you very much. I'll try to keep on writing. :)
That was a really beautiful story! I loved the descriptive language you used. You have a wonderful writing style. I honestly cannot find anything to criticize about it. I just love it!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. I'm delighted you enjoyed it so much.