The last paragraph is quite thought-provoking. However there are a lot of rhymes in this story, which makes it short and to the point. It's good to see Frodo's POV on this subject as I have not read much about his reasons for not settling down/marrying.
You should definately continue writing - I am a Hobbit fan so I'm glad to read anything about any of them, especially Merry and Pippin, although I enjoyed reading this overall. Best wishes in your present and future writing,
Wow! Now this is a good Frodo fic. And the fact I'm a frodo fan makes it even better! Well done! Very touching. Keep it up! xx
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Please spread the word of my stories and enjoy the others