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Reviewer: meerkatalex Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hmm. This poem expresses Frodo's thoughts and feelings quite well, although it is rather long. Maybe you should write a poem from Sam's POV on the way to Mordor?

I love the way that you have handled Sam's and Frodo's relationship, almost tenderly, as they have a bond that is so strong. You have portrayed Frodo well, and the rhymes are quite good. Please read some of my stories - I'm sure you would enjoy "Joined", which is about Frodo and Sam too. Well I've enjoyed reading and reviewing, and I wish you luck with your writing!


Reviewer: Bein_Fuin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/09/06 - 03:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay! A Frodo fic and a brilliant one indeed! :-) Sorry, I'm a heavy Frodo fan. Well done! Keep it up! x

Author's Response: Don't say sorry, I love Frodo too! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/09/06 - 12:19 am Title: Chapter 1

that was beautiful!

sometimes the wording was hard to understand though

Author's Response: Well most of the words I used were from my vocabulary in English class, but thanks for reading!

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