Hmm. This poem expresses Frodo's thoughts and feelings quite well, although it is rather long. Maybe you should write a poem from Sam's POV on the way to Mordor?
I love the way that you have handled Sam's and Frodo's relationship, almost tenderly, as they have a bond that is so strong. You have portrayed Frodo well, and the rhymes are quite good. Please read some of my stories - I'm sure you would enjoy "Joined", which is about Frodo and Sam too. Well I've enjoyed reading and reviewing, and I wish you luck with your writing!
Yay! A Frodo fic and a brilliant one indeed! :-) Sorry, I'm a heavy Frodo fan. Well done! Keep it up! x
Author's Response: Don't say sorry, I love Frodo too! Thanks for reading!