Oh...this is good! I really like it! YAY POEMS!! It was sad though, kinda hopeless...but lovely! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Yeah, I guess it is a little depressing...I wasn't in the best of moods. Thanks for reviewing!
OH MY GOD. I had an experience exactly like that just last week! I posted a couple or songs on here about it, but that "friend" wasn't too happy, so I had to delete it.
That is just too weird that you described my problem exactly!
Author's Response: That is wierd! I'm never sure whether I should be glad people can identify with my writing, or sympathetic that so many other people have the same problems. Anyways, thanks for reviewing!
That is very sad...and I understand. But sometimes it helps to just write it all out. ... You have one error...at the end in the second to last stanza I think you meant saviour...you have savious.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! And thanks for poining out the error...I'll go fix it straight away.