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Title: Impossible Reviewer: Aerlinniel Signed
Sorry, just a dumb blonde moment right now...

~Mel
Date: 10/07/06 10:39 pm [Report This]
Title: This Is Wrong Reviewer: Aerlinniel Signed
um, no offense, but what part of your story does this apply to?

Other than that, I thought it was really good...reminded me of a poem one of my friends wrote a couple of years back.

~Mel
Date: 10/07/06 10:32 pm [Report This]
Title: Impossible Reviewer: Aerlinniel Signed
I still don't get the concept of Mary Sues...but you're right, Ariea is definately not a Mary Sue!

One thing though, I think you should change 'Isn't it?' at the end to 'Right?' because it will go better with the rest of the fic.

See ya 'round!

~Mel

Author's Response: THANKS!
Date: 10/07/06 05:49 pm [Report This]
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