Wait ... you said 'If slash is not your thing then I suggest that you stay here and read the friendly version', but before that you said 'If you would like to read the alternate rating version then simply continue here. WARNING: ALTERNATE VERSION CONTAINS SLASH.' I don't get it. Do we stay here to get slash, or do we go to fanfiction.net for slash???
Author's Response: oops sry, i'll fix that, i'm posting this story also on fanfiction.net for those who don't want to read a slash story. for those that do, they may simply continue reading here.
I like the way you portray the lifestyle and love of the people who ally themselves to orcs. People are people, no matter what race or religious beliefs seperate them. i think you did this chapter really well.
Aww... can't wait until Legolas gets home. Spelling errors, however... "Danm" and "damn" don't know if you meant to to that or not. Also, "weather" should have been "whether." But otherwise I LOVE this fic so far, adding it to my favorites and saes update soon mellon nin... can't wait!
I meant to ask about your username as well... did you make that up or get it off of sword of mana? just wondering... i really like it. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Ug... more spelling errors.... I'm really not that good at spelling, but thanks for pointing them out. :) and I just came up with the user name... It's one I've been using on Gaia Online, but I thought it was pretty cool... I've always liked the idea of water, tree and earth sprites. :)
ooh... this should be interesting, it's a great plot for your first fic. Two spelling errors that I noticed, one is "gapping" I think you meant gaping... :) Other is "spurned" I think you mean "spurred" other than that, great work and can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: Thanks for the spelling errors, I rely to heavily on spell check. hehe :)
Oh wow! This story is so cool. Keep it up! I await the update! Brilliant! :-) Love Bein_Fuinx
Author's Response: thanks, i'll be updating soon :)