I really enjoy your story thus far and hope you update soon. I've been checking for the past few weeks for an update and so far, I'm still waiting but don't worry; I know how hard it is to find the time to write).
This is a great story, I love the way that the attraction is building between Aragorn and Legolas. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I haven't had a chance to start the next section (been very busy with school) but I will try to write it this weekend and have it up asap!
Aww! So cute, and sad. I love the way this plot is coming along.
There were a few little spelling mistakes. In one sentence you wrote 'Aragorn mussed,' and that should be 'Aragorn mused'. Also it's scared, not scarred, and when you write 'Oh' you need the h on the end.
Aside from that it was really great. I can't wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy for me but I will try to have the next chapter up asap!
i know Legolas is the youngest..but how old is he anyway?
Author's Response: Umm....I had really thought about that. In my story I was thinking elves would come into their majority around 100 years old......so Legolas is still farily young so I guess he would probably be 150 or 200. Thanks for bringing that up.
Oh, this is beautiful story! I'm not a huge slash fan, but this is brilliant! Certainly keep it up! xxx :-) xxx
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel so honored that you think its brilliant. i love that word. haha! i will try to have the next chapter up asap.
Fantastic chapter! I love how the plot is moving so far.
There were a couple of spelling mistakes, so I would maybe suggest getting a beta reader to fix those.
That aside, I really loved this chapter. Please update soon!
Author's Response: haha im glad you like it so far. yeah i need to look into getting someone to beta my story. thanks for the suggestion. i will try to update asap!
Great first chapter! Very AU (as Aragorn actually grew up in Rivendell) but I really loved it!
Oropher was actually the name of Legolas' grandfather, and I doubt that Thranduil would have named a son after his dead father. The elves just didn't do that. And one spelling mistake...it's 'Aragorn', not 'Aragon'.
Apart from that, it was an excellent chapter. I thought the opening paragraph was very good; it set the scene really well for the rest of the story.
I can't wait to see how this turns out. Please update soon!
Author's Response: o god! i feel like such an idiot for the spelling mistake! i promise that will not happen again! yes it is very AU. As much as I like stories that follow along with the book/movie i wanted to do something different. i will try to update asap! thanks for the praise!