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Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/06 - 06:39 pm Title: The Fox and the Hound...

Cool the chapters finished! Kill who? Faramir or Taetalus? I guess I'm not supposed to know that yet. Update soon!

~Faramiriel

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/06 - 01:28 am Title: The Fox and the Hound...

Um ok you left it mid-sentence? nice. maybe you should finish chapters b4 you post them. update soon!


~Faramiriel

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/06 - 01:25 am Title: First light on the subject...

What was Taetalus doing with a Morgul blade? Yay, chapters are getting longer! On to the next one...

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/11/06 - 08:44 pm Title: Tread Lightly in the darkness...

oh my god i am scared. Please update really really soon!


do you want a beta?

Author's Response: Yeah sure.The reason that i write short chapters is cos i have to write at school and it's hard to dodge teachers. I'm only using these chapters as a basic outline and i'm writing up a hard copy at home so i'll send that to u later if u like.

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/06 - 12:36 am Title: The Calm After he storm...

cool an update. MORE!!! Please, write longer chapters!

~Faramiriel

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/10/06 - 04:33 am Title: The storm has Broken

You need to type more carefully and write longer chapters. Update soon!! I'll read it!

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/10/06 - 04:31 am Title: Through the storm...

you have a few mistakes.

1. The constant drizzle seemed to be getting to Him. Don't capitalize him.

2. Leutenant. It's spelled lieutenant.

3. The got Karathor. They got Karathor.

Reviewer: faramiriel Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/10/06 - 04:27 am Title: A few Leagues More...

Mourier? Is that supposed to say Moria?

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