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Title: The Fox and the Hound... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
Cool the chapters finished! Kill who? Faramir or Taetalus? I guess I'm not supposed to know that yet. Update soon!

Date: 09/11/06 - 01:39 pm [Report This]
Title: The Fox and the Hound... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
Um ok you left it mid-sentence? nice. maybe you should finish chapters b4 you post them. update soon!

Date: 06/11/06 - 08:28 pm [Report This]
Title: First light on the subject... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
What was Taetalus doing with a Morgul blade? Yay, chapters are getting longer! On to the next one...
Date: 06/11/06 - 08:25 pm [Report This]
Title: Tread Lightly in the darkness... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
oh my god i am scared. Please update really really soon!

do you want a beta?

Author's Response: Yeah sure.The reason that i write short chapters is cos i have to write at school and it's hard to dodge teachers. I'm only using these chapters as a basic outline and i'm writing up a hard copy at home so i'll send that to u later if u like.
Date: 03/11/06 - 03:44 pm [Report This]
Title: The Calm After he storm... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
cool an update. MORE!!! Please, write longer chapters!

Date: 01/11/06 - 07:36 pm [Report This]
Title: The storm has Broken Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
You need to type more carefully and write longer chapters. Update soon!! I'll read it!
Date: 29/10/06 - 11:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Through the storm... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
you have a few mistakes.

1. The constant drizzle seemed to be getting to Him. Don't capitalize him.

2. Leutenant. It's spelled lieutenant.

3. The got Karathor. They got Karathor.
Date: 29/10/06 - 11:31 pm [Report This]
Title: A few Leagues More... Reviewer: faramiriel Signed
Mourier? Is that supposed to say Moria?
Date: 29/10/06 - 11:27 pm [Report This]
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