Great song! This one's fairly short, but still really good. Did your teacher really do that to you? Anyway, well done!
Author's Response: Yep. She did. She also gave me a 65% in gym. And I am always getting above eighties in all my subjects. But this term I was depressed a lot, so I didn't participate much. I guess I paid for it. Thanks for reviewing!!! ~Mel
Well, that is one of the down things about school! I am homeschooled, so even if I was invisible, no one would see me anyway! LOL. (Mum doesn't count :)) I have friends though. I think you missed out a y. the poem read
"the stopped the time"
instead of "they stopped the time"
It was a good poem though.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I'll have to fix that! Glad you found that for me! I have never been homeschooled, but I guess that it has it's advantages eh? ~Mel
I know how that feels! But I'm the sort who prefers invisibility to the horror of preps and other rep groups that I despise. I've recently moved and I hate being the new face in the school . . . luckily (this time) this song is how I feel. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hate preps because they think that they are better than everyone and they are real mean. It doesn't help that I am a misfit. I have never moved, so I can't say I know how you feel about that one. Thanks for reviewing!!! ~Mel