Reviews For This is a Dream
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed
I like this, especilly the 'I was alone, no place to call home' bit, as that is how I sometimes feel.
Date: 18/05/07 - 09:28 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Buckleberry Signed
Great poem! I love that scene.
Please write some more poems like that!

(And, just a quick note, I think it should be 'love' and not 'live' on the second-last line!)

Author's Response: Thanks, I really like that scene too and I just had to write it. And I plan on making more. And thanks for o not i. I guess I should look at my poems more.
Date: 10/11/06 - 03:15 am [Report This]
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