*Laughs* Ok, so you're MY second reviewer, and I'm YOURS! Funny how life works.. I think it's good, but I keep getting confused between characters.. But that might just be my poor memory *Grins* but I DEFINITLY know who Varion is *Smirks*
Author's Response: How can you get confused between characters? They only have one name each...?
That was a wonderful first chapter! And I'm proud to be your first reviewer! I could see where this story could eventually be turned into a movie. It's really that good! This story is definitely going on my favorites! I can't wait to see more chapters! ~God bless
Author's Response: Hey thanks, that means a lot to me, I hope the rest will be as good as you find the first chapter.