Reviews For My "Desperado"
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Reviewer: Irial Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/12 - 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Ouch! Whatever happened sounds like he was a jerk. But he made you write something powerful! And that's a plus for us, your readers :D ~ Iri

Author's Response: Thanks for that! I'm glad you have liked my poems! ~iggybaby

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/12/06 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1

This was a touching poem, very realistic. Although I did think the last two stanzas sounded a little clumsy. The suicidal theme came into it rather abruptly, considering the body of the poem wasn't particularly angsty. Still, it was very good.

Author's Response: Thank you for the critism! now i can build on that! I'll try to work on it, if i have any time. iggybaby

Reviewer: Aerlinniel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/11/06 - 12:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Figures. I should've guessed. It was a bit obvious wasn't it?

~Mel

Author's Response: Um, yeah! iggybaby

Reviewer: Aerlinniel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/11/06 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Okay, I won't ask! I just hope that poem's not about me!!

Anyways, it's perfect, like all the rest of your work!

Luv ya!

~Mel

Author's Response: Don't worry. it's not about you. it's about You know who. wink, wink. iggybaby

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