This was a touching poem, very realistic. Although I did think the last two stanzas sounded a little clumsy. The suicidal theme came into it rather abruptly, considering the body of the poem wasn't particularly angsty. Still, it was very good.
Author's Response: Thank you for the critism! now i can build on that! I'll try to work on it, if i have any time. iggybaby
Okay, I won't ask! I just hope that poem's not about me!!
Anyways, it's perfect, like all the rest of your work!
Author's Response: Don't worry. it's not about you. it's about You know who. wink, wink. iggybaby