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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Alataril Serinde Signed
This is a well-written poem, but 'dwarfes' is actually 'dwarves' (I think) and 'Aragon' 'Aragorn. The last line seems a bit clumsy; 'grin' doesn't seem to be the right word, but other than that, I like it!

Author's Response: *Smacks computer.* I hate it when it changes my words. Thanks for letting me know! I will go change it. And I agree with you about the last line, it is clumsy, but I thought that it exspressed(spelling?) my views nicely so I kept it. Thank you so much!rn
Date: 18/05/07 - 09:31 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Merry Signed
I like it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 19/11/06 - 11:45 am [Report This]
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