This is a well-written poem, but 'dwarfes' is actually 'dwarves' (I think) and 'Aragon' 'Aragorn. The last line seems a bit clumsy; 'grin' doesn't seem to be the right word, but other than that, I like it!
Author's Response: *Smacks computer.* I hate it when it changes my words. Thanks for letting me know! I will go change it. And I agree with you about the last line, it is clumsy, but I thought that it exspressed(spelling?) my views nicely so I kept it. Thank you so much!rn