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The fact that you made up your own language is just awesome. And the poem matches it perfectly. I could *feel* what the words meant.
Author's Response: It's funny cause as I was writing they just came to me. I have no idea what they mean.
I've written a sad peom about Aragorn greving because Arwen's dead, it's not as good as your peoms but have you read it?
Author's Response: I don't belive so. I'll check it out:)rniggybaby
You write amazing peoms!!!
I think that this os one of the better ones of your poems/ songs you did a great job, great flow and vocabulary
Author's Response: why thank you. that is a most pleasant comment. thax for the review!rniggybaby
Well, it is quite a nice poem. The imagery you have used is beautiful, and it flows very well. However, I'd probably stick to using real languages. Or Elvish, you could always use Elvish! Made-up languages are generally very confusing to everyone except the inventor. Just a thought...anyway, I did like this.
Author's Response: thanks for the advice! I'll remeber that in the future.
iggybaby
This is really cool! I love it! :) You have one slight typo, but it's perfectly fine. It's definitely going on my favourites. :D
Author's Response: alright. i'll correct it asap! thanks for the heads up!
iggybaby
Like the language Meg! Did that perhaps come from your 'Alternate Reality' by any chance???
~Mel
Author's Response: No, gobble gobble comes from our alternate reality.
iggybaby
Wow, you're good at this! Love the poems/songs!
Author's Response: Thanks. i love writing them. i'm getting quite good at them, i think.
iggybaby