Ooh, sorry I didn't review sooner! This chapter was fantastic. You just love leaving cliffies, don't you? This is a fairly common plotline, but yours is one of the first takes on it I've been able to enjoy. This is a fantastic story! Will you update soon if I whine and beg enough? How bout my puppy-dog eyes, they usually work...
Author's Response: Thanx!! Yeah it is a common plot line, but I got the idea and just couldn't let it go! Yes I love cliffies :) it builds suspense! thanx for the review!
Very interesting, slightly confusing, rather funny, that is my review, but anyway...
Please update, preferably sooner rather than later
Author's Response: Hey, thankyou for your re_iew! Yeah this one was a little confusing I sort of made it up on a whim. I'll update soon, I promise!! Its been so hard to balance school work and writing lately so I apologize for any delays!! :)
Well, I enjoyed that writing, it's a good story, keep it up when you can and i'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Thanx!! I'm halfway through the second chapter, so I'll post it soon. I really appreciate the review!
Wow, this is fantastic! Hun, I am really impressed...but I won't stand for cliffies like this! Please, you have to update soon. Your characterization is great, your descritions are beautifully vivid...but you can't leave us hanging like that! Write more soon!
Author's Response: Wow, Thanx!! I was wondering what people would think of this one. The idea came to me in the middle of math class, I mean what is math for anyway? Thanxe again, I'm really glad you like it!! :)