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...sad but very insightful. This poem is good to bring awareness.
This is so sad, but the society we live in today is just like this. You wrote it in a very beautiful and moving way. Great job!
I really like this one. For a first piece of work it's well done. Keep it up!
~Mel
that was really good. very, deep.... but good.
Heartbreaking. It is terrible, but this sort of thing is becoming almost common in our society, and for a lot of people this is their reality. The way you've portrayed it is just beautiful. I seriously loved it. I am adding it to my favourites. I look forward to seeing the rest of your work!
YAY! Go um...Callisto! (I hope I never reveal your real name, ahh!)
As I have already said, that was a great poem, although very sad. Don't be discouraged if you have only one or two reviews, it takes a while to get known (even then it's hit and miss, or so I'm told) well done!
~*Sweetie*~