Yes! I like it alot. The two-to-three words per line makes a wonderful, surreal feeling, almost like a flash of understanding that fades quickly.
Author's Response: Yeah, I love writing simple yet powerful images in my poems. thanx for the rerview!
Wow, I really like this poem. The way you write is just so beautiful. You are definitely one of favorite authors on this site! This is going on my favorites! ~God bless
Author's Response: Really?! *blushes and giggles awkwardly*. iggybaby