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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Peregrin Took Signed
I thought your story was very interesting. I like it how you had Diamond meet Treebeard. I was very shocked at the part when Legolas and Gimli died. Another interesting thing is that Arwen went along with the Fellowship. Keep up the good work!
Date: 23/04/11 - 10:47 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Well, that was somewhat unexpected, Legolas and Gimli died, but Boromir didnt? I like the style, and you've extended it a little longer.
(although you didn't actually write anything for the first chapter, the wait was worth it)
Date: 10/01/07 - 02:50 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
What terrible fate! They will all be heartbroken when they find out the truth.
iggybaby
Date: 09/01/07 - 06:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Noo! He can't die! They can't die! Noo!
iggybaby
Date: 08/01/07 - 07:48 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Keep writing! It's awesome!
iggybaby
Date: 08/01/07 - 07:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
ooo. foreshadowing. i can't make out what it could mean though. the waters are murky and my vision, clouded.
iggybaby
Date: 31/12/06 - 07:26 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
A few spelling mistakes here and there but really, it is wonderfully exciting.
iggybaby
Date: 31/12/06 - 07:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
interesting. i'm guessing Merry and pippin have not yet come to fangorn.
iggybaby
Date: 31/12/06 - 07:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
I like it, but still remember, commas on the inside of the speech marks
Date: 30/12/06 - 01:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
It's a bit brief at points, just some constructive critisism
It's "slew," not slayed.
Punctuation goes inside the speech marks, not outside.
Other than that, good, but just a bit too short.

Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!
Date: 30/12/06 - 06:05 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed
Hee-heee, very hobbitish.
Date: 26/12/06 - 08:54 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
"Are we there yet?" hee hee hee! I love that fool of a took!
iggybaby
Date: 24/12/06 - 05:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
How romantic! *sighs* Only death can separate them.
iggybaby
Date: 23/12/06 - 03:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
Sounds interesting! So... Write more!
iggybaby
Date: 22/12/06 - 01:55 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed
Begun... hm... looks like it never got started to me
Date: 22/12/06 - 05:33 am [Report This]
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