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Reviews For Ending, Falling, and Fading
Reviewer: Peregrin Took Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/04/11 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 24/04/11 - 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I thought your story was very interesting. I like it how you had Diamond meet Treebeard. I was very shocked at the part when Legolas and Gimli died. Another interesting thing is that Arwen went along with the Fellowship. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter 9
Date: 10/01/07 - 07:50 am Title: Chapter 9
Well, that was somewhat unexpected, Legolas and Gimli died, but Boromir didnt? I like the style, and you've extended it a little longer.
(although you didn't actually write anything for the first chapter, the wait was worth it)
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/07 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
Date: 09/01/07 - 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 9
What terrible fate! They will all be heartbroken when they find out the truth.
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/07 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 8
Date: 09/01/07 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 8
Noo! He can't die! They can't die! Noo!
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/01/07 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Date: 09/01/07 - 12:46 am Title: Chapter 7
Keep writing! It's awesome!
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/07 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 6
Date: 01/01/07 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter 6
ooo. foreshadowing. i can't make out what it could mean though. the waters are murky and my vision, clouded.
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/07 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Date: 01/01/07 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter 5
A few spelling mistakes here and there but really, it is wonderfully exciting.
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/07 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Date: 01/01/07 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter 4
interesting. i'm guessing Merry and pippin have not yet come to fangorn.
iggybaby
Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/06 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
Date: 30/12/06 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6
I like it, but still remember, commas on the inside of the speech marks
Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/06 - 11:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Date: 30/12/06 - 11:05 am Title: Chapter 5
It's a bit brief at points, just some constructive critisism
It's "slew," not slayed.
Punctuation goes inside the speech marks, not outside.
Other than that, good, but just a bit too short.
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice!
Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/12/06 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Date: 27/12/06 - 01:54 am Title: Chapter 3
Hee-heee, very hobbitish.
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/12/06 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
Date: 24/12/06 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 3
"Are we there yet?" hee hee hee! I love that fool of a took!
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/12/06 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Date: 23/12/06 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
How romantic! *sighs* Only death can separate them.
iggybaby
Reviewer: iggybaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/06 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 22/12/06 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sounds interesting! So... Write more!
iggybaby
Reviewer: Shadow Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/12/06 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 22/12/06 - 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Begun... hm... looks like it never got started to me