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Reviewer: Luthien Elendil Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/07 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Really good
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Reviewer: Luthien Elendil Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/07 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome story
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Reviewer: Wyn Telemnar Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/12/06 - 02:31 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting, you could use a little spell-check, but lright otherwise. A bit of advice, try tomake your characters more personalable to the reader. Make them WANT to read. Wecome to LOTR fanfiction, I wish you many long stories and a merry Christmas!

Author's Response: Thanks- that's really helpful advice. I definitely agree with what you said about my characters; one of my biggest worries is that they're not very personable or relatable (I think I'm making up a word there...) On the other hand, I like each character having a title. (i.e. "The Slave" being Rana's title) I think it gives each character a fixed place in the story, and an added element of fate, that the story is being told by someone or controlled by someone (the king?) Sorry, I don't think any of that made sense to anybody but me :) I really need to go to sleep. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Bein_Fuin Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 23/12/06 - 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! This is a fantastic first story. Welcome to the site. I'm Sarah-Kate but you can just call me Saz.

Your story was very well written. Keep up the good work! xxxx

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate the welcome- I'm loving this site so far. Merry Christmas! :)

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