It sounds like a spin off of a darker side of "When you step out onto the road, there's no knowing where you might be swept off to."
I like it! You're a great writer & I hope you continue. I'm always looking for more good writers on this site.
Author's Response: Thanks! While I was writing this I was thinking less about a journey and more about the irony of city life, but new interpretations are always exiting to hear! I'm glad you like my writing, and thanks for the review!
Very well written. Well done. Oh and before I forget, Merry Christmas!!! xx
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Hm.. Sounds like something I'd write, although my favourite topic is the end of the world.. It's a fasinating subject really, mortality, the way we're destroying ourselves and everything around us..
Author's Response: Yeah, that's what really inspired me- the city is such a paradox, the way we crowd close together and yet nobody meets each others' eyes and acts so afraid of each other. Very interesting.. Thanks for the review and Merry Christmas! :]