I am actually speechless.
You write incredibly beautifully, and the chapter that you said wasnt very good was my favourite. The description is intircate without being heavy. I'm so impressed.
im sort of blundering through this, grasping at any words that will do justice to my reaction but i cant! I'll resort to sounds instead.
(i had to repost this because i forgot the out on without, so it sounded a bit critical...oops..)
Oh my goodness! This story is fantastic! I love it! And the storyline is one I certainly never would have come up with! I wish I could write as good as this! xxx
Author's Response: Thanks! I've been thinking about this fic for a while. :) I'm trying to make it as canon as possible.