Interesting chapter.... please continue. I like the way she has found someone other than legolas or Haldir to fall in love with.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! You know what; I agree with you about how she didn't end up with Haldir or Legolas. It's not that they aren't wonderful characters or anything, it's just that they are always the ones who end up with the OC's. I really like Eomer...he's definitely one of my favorites. Ok, I will stop jabbering and start working on the next chapter! Thanks again! ~God bless
For someone who claims not to write battle scenes very well, you did pretty well! Great chapter! I love your character. You done a good job at keeping her from being a Mary sue so far...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was very worried that Sonya would turn into a Mary sue. So it's really good to hear you say that she isn't so far. Thanks a bunch! ~God bless
Is this going to be a romance? Just wondering... Good chapter.
Author's Response: It might well be *grins* keep on reading! Teehee, I'm going to be adding another chapter today...hopefully. Thank you so much for your review! ~God bless
hee hee. i love these romantic scenes1 they always make me feel giddy when i read them.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Yeah, I like romantic scenes, too! Well, I'll try to add as soon as possible. Thanks again! ~God bless
It was good that you reflected back on her past. It made me understand her even more. I don't see why they would want her to fight when she was nearly killed! At least let her fully heal before bringing her into battle! And have her decide what she want for herself!(I'm talking to Legolas here.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Yeah, I'm really trying to figure out how I'll bring her into battle or if I'll bring her into battle at all. The point of the story I suppose is to make her bitter and not want to be doing anything. I mean, if we had a past like that and then were wounded, we wouldn't want to be fighting either. It's a last minute choice that Sonya has to take. I hope my jabbering didn't put you to sleep. Thanks again for your review! ~God bless