It was good that you reflected back on her past. It made me understand her even more. I don't see why they would want her to fight when she was nearly killed! At least let her fully heal before bringing her into battle! And have her decide what she want for herself!(I'm talking to Legolas here.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! Yeah, I'm really trying to figure out how I'll bring her into battle or if I'll bring her into battle at all. The point of the story I suppose is to make her bitter and not want to be doing anything. I mean, if we had a past like that and then were wounded, we wouldn't want to be fighting either. It's a last minute choice that Sonya has to take. I hope my jabbering didn't put you to sleep. Thanks again for your review! ~God bless
i don't really see how she could be a Mary-Sue. I mean, she has had a troubled past with her parents abandoning her and all.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and for reassuring me that she isn't a Mary-Sue. I know that there is always a possibility that she could turn in to one, though, and I'm trying to be careful of that. :) Thanks again for your kind review! I'll add another chapter as soon as I can! ~God bless
Oh...my...god. Absolutely fantastic! I can't wait till your next update. I am loving this! Great job Sharpe! Keep up the good work! xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh my gosh, what a compliment! I'm going to work on another chapter.....hopefully this one will be longer. Thanks a bunch! ~God bless
eee! Cliffhanger! You write excitement from the very first word.
Author's Response: Oh wow, what a compliment! Thanks so much for you review! I've added another chapter, if you're interested. Thanks a bunch! ~God bless