i don't really see how she could be a Mary-Sue. I mean, she has had a troubled past with her parents abandoning her and all.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and for reassuring me that she isn't a Mary-Sue. I know that there is always a possibility that she could turn in to one, though, and I'm trying to be careful of that. :) Thanks again for your kind review! I'll add another chapter as soon as I can! ~God bless
Oh...my...god. Absolutely fantastic! I can't wait till your next update. I am loving this! Great job Sharpe! Keep up the good work! xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Oh my gosh, what a compliment! I'm going to work on another chapter.....hopefully this one will be longer. Thanks a bunch! ~God bless
eee! Cliffhanger! You write excitement from the very first word.
Author's Response: Oh wow, what a compliment! Thanks so much for you review! I've added another chapter, if you're interested. Thanks a bunch! ~God bless