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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
oh the poor girl! I think the site of all that blood would make me sick too!!!
Make sure your paragraphs are well spaced, but this is a good story and a orginal plot


~*Sweetie*~
Date: 12/01/07 - 02:07 am [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Sweetie Signed
This is a good beginning, I would love to beta this story! Do you want a beta?

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Dear Sweetie, thanks for your suggestion and for your reviews! I'd be only happy if you would give me a hand with this story. It's only i haven't got any beta before that's why it's a bit confusing, but anyway it'll be great!
Date: 12/01/07 - 01:54 am [Report This]
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