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Reviewer: Sweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 - 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1

oh the poor girl! I think the site of all that blood would make me sick too!!!
Make sure your paragraphs are well spaced, but this is a good story and a orginal plot


~*Sweetie*~

Reviewer: Sweetie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/07 - 06:54 am Title: Prologue

This is a good beginning, I would love to beta this story! Do you want a beta?

~*Sweetie*~

Author's Response: Dear Sweetie, thanks for your suggestion and for your reviews! I'd be only happy if you would give me a hand with this story. It's only i haven't got any beta before that's why it's a bit confusing, but anyway it'll be great!

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