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Reviewer: Brassen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1

LOL! Very cool.

Author's Response: glad you like it! =D

Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 08:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Ooh, very funny!! It's really good. Now for the inevitable concrit, because for some reason I'm just itching to criticize today (as you'll have noticed if you read my other review, lol).

Firstly, Gollum, not Golem. Secondly, the actions (which you've put in brackets) should go after the colon, not before. Thirdly, 'In descript ranger' didn't quite make sense. Maybe if you put something like 'I'm just a ranger!'. Just some thoughts.

Really sorry about being so critical! You know I love it really...just like I love all of your work. I can't wait for the rest of this!

Author's Response: Ooops...that what happens when you go without coffee I guess. Thanks for the review, I'll change asap! =)

Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 05:00 am Title: Chapter 1

lololol. I loved this! The way you wrote it was just so amusing! Please add more soon! ~God bless

Author's Response: thanks=)

Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/07 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 1

*adds to Favorites* Hilarious!!! Write more soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanx!! I will! =D

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