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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Shadow Maiden Signed
Did you know that the origional meaning of lunatic was bewitched by the moon? I thought I'd share that little tidbit with you. Great stuff! I really like reading your stories, etc. I'm working on In Flux now so, you'll be hearing more from me . . . :))
Date: 26/11/08 - 08:52 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gemini_Elf Signed
Wow

Author's Response: thanx =)
Date: 11/01/07 - 01:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel Signed
Wow, you've done it again. Absolutely beautiful! I don't honw how you come up with these, but they are stunning.

Now for a couple of grammatical corrections, because I am a beta-raeder and I can't help myself sometimes. =) I think you should replace the exclamation marks with full stops, as the wording of the lines is dramatic enough not to need the extra emphasis. It would flow better without them. Secondly, 'dieing' needs to be 'dying'.

There. Now that I'm done nitpicking, I will say again that I adore this piece and I hope you'll write more of these things!

Author's Response: oops, thanx!! *sheepish grin* I'll fix it right away. =)
Date: 10/01/07 - 02:59 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sharpe_and_Harper Signed
Oh wow! I really loved this! It was so beautifully written! Wonderful work...this is definitely going on my favorites! ~God bless

Author's Response: thanx!
Date: 09/01/07 - 11:57 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: iggybaby Signed
I love it! You rhyme beautifully! i can't rhyme to save my life.
iggybaby

Author's Response: thanx*blushing* I still like yours best, though! =
Date: 09/01/07 - 08:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BookLuva7 Signed
*smiles* Short, but sweet ... I like it! :D
Date: 09/01/07 - 08:39 pm [Report This]
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