I've just discovered this little gem, and I read it from start to where it ends at the moment. Its fantastic. I love the way it written, and i cannot get enough of it!!
Author's Response: That means a lot to me. :) Thank you!
Maybe you could name this chapter "A Morning Without Coffee". I can't but imagine that there will be repercussions to Sir Ian's missing his coffee. (!) This chapter seems good even un-proofread.
Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, great idea. :) I will do so.
I love it, it is so cool! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! As soon as life calms down I should add another chapter. :) I have a big horse show next week & then it's smooth sailin', I hope.
I love the concept of the story, and I really admire your bravery in tackling it. So far, the characters are interesting and believable.
Author's Response: Thank you! I was a little wary of it myself at the beginning, but I'm having fun now. :)