Your imagery is so beautiful! It's hard to write descriptively about the night sky and still be original, but you manage to do both. Your language is just gorgeous.
One minor comment: in you last sentence, you write "you'd of thought." The correct term is "would have thought." Sorry for my grammar nazi tendencies...
Anyway, fantastic job! I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Hahaha! No, I know-- I reread that sentence an' I was like... Whoa. I must have typed it the way I slur it. ^.^ You'da thunk so, anyway. I'll fix that up! Thanks for the review!
This just gets better with every chapter. Your descriptions of fangorn are beautifully written, and you create an image that's more vivid and meaningful than any movie could. Your characters are believable, and the dialogue is engaging and beautifully worded. In short, this is one of my favorite stories. Fantastic job.
Author's Response: Thanks! It means a lot to have you say that. :)
Billeh! Hah hah! this is too funny for words! Pretty please post another chapter soon! I want to read about Billeh!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I posted one, but it's about Elijah Wood and Andy Serkis, though I'll revisit Fangorn sooooon.